Great post! I want to bring your attention to this part: "Not everyone is deep enough, not everyone is sufficiently broad minded." I'd love to see you rewrite that without using the "is" - meaning, can you describe what you mean when you say someone "isn't" deep or broad-minded enough?
My prediction, in rot13 so you can do the exercise before seeing it:
Great post! I want to bring your attention to this part: "Not everyone is deep enough, not everyone is sufficiently broad minded." I'd love to see you rewrite that without using the "is" - meaning, can you describe what you mean when you say someone "isn't" deep or broad-minded enough?
My prediction, in rot13 so you can do the exercise before seeing it:
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Thank you! I love the suggestion and have already re written it. I’ll go back and check the rot13 message :)
Awesome! My prediction was wrong, by like 180 degrees. But that's what learning looks like. :)
Thanks for humoring me.